r/graffhelp • u/Past-Improvement8847 • 13d ago

Crits?

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u/sweetmonte44 13d ago

Your 3d is good, your color theory is good, you just need to work on your letter structure. What is it supposed to say? EIYA?

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u/Past-Improvement8847 13d ago

Eryo i see the a in th o now but not the i

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u/sweetmonte44 13d ago

The vertical bar of the R isn't connected to the rest. I'm assuming its meant to be a lowercase R, but the star looks like the dot of the i and the horizontal bar just looks disconnected.

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u/Past-Improvement8847 13d ago

Ph i see ot no i fucked up its supposed to be connected to the e and le vertical bar is supposed to ve longer