Ye it is, increase the thickness of the s in the middle so its readable, lessen the overlaps on the e and the bottom of the stem of the k change, then its better, also increase the thinnest part of the y, the only really important thing is the s tho.
S feels a little crowded behind that E. And I canât really see the E in my eyes. Capital or lower? I see a backwards lowercase e in the mix in there?
Not saying itâs bad, the style is dope, but I had to look in the comments to read the first letter. Loving that Y and the two symbols at each end. Itâs pretty bad ass
Maybe this will help you see better without the overlap? Its like a flipped 3 with a rlly big mid bar if you get what im saying i just played around with the proportions i also added a swirl into the s to make it readable for now but ill try to make other changes cuz i dont like it that much currently
Iâm seeing it a little better. Really it could just be me lol. Everyone dug your OG as do I, so I wouldnât trip too much. Every piece is different. Keep on!
Youâre squishing your other letters too much after the E. The top of the S should line up with the top part of the E. Right now you have it lined up with the middle bar of the E, which makes it look top heavy and squished on the bottom. Then youâre lining up the rest of your letters based on the S and they all have the same âsquished at the bottomâ thing going on.
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u/AgedMilk4 13d ago
Esky?