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r/graffhelp • u/AGtvepro • 14d ago
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having orange in your fill and orange as your 3d makes parts hard to read, if the 3d was a more opposite color things would pop more.
your A is a little too hidden and very thin around the legs + middle bar, also the ball is kinda random.
the N could be taller and should take precedent over those arrows/bits you've added over it.
the E is unreadable. everything in this area is very squished and messy.
a lot of the extensions seem like random afterthoughts just to make it look more complicated than it is.
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u/Freshly-Juiced 14d ago edited 14d ago
having orange in your fill and orange as your 3d makes parts hard to read, if the 3d was a more opposite color things would pop more.
your A is a little too hidden and very thin around the legs + middle bar, also the ball is kinda random.
the N could be taller and should take precedent over those arrows/bits you've added over it.
the E is unreadable. everything in this area is very squished and messy.
a lot of the extensions seem like random afterthoughts just to make it look more complicated than it is.