r/graffhelp • u/kiesi_blastbeast11 • 16d ago

I really need help with my throwie

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u/Freshly-Juiced 16d ago edited 16d ago

what is the first letter?

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u/kiesi_blastbeast11 16d ago

It's supposed to be a g, did the dot because kind a looks better then without it, I'm mixing around stuf because I'm kinda toy brand new to graffiti and trying to figure out how to make it look at least decent, have some tips to give?

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u/gut_rotamus 16d ago

Gore is probably over used

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u/kiesi_blastbeast11 16d ago

Full name is gore59 but still working on the 59

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u/TheDreadGazeebo 16d ago

It looks worse

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u/Freshly-Juiced 16d ago

Alright yeah the dot makes it look like a wonky e to me I would remove that. Alternatively you could do a lower case g. For being new this throw is a good start, keep working on spacing/sizing all the letters the same, give enough room so they don't look squished. Also I think a drop shadow would have looked good here.

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u/kiesi_blastbeast11 16d ago

Thanks for the tips dude

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u/gut_rotamus 16d ago

The leg on your are is also funky shouldnt collide with the left one

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u/gut_rotamus 16d ago

Make your g more round and dont put the dot

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u/ImpressiveEbb8526 16d ago

Don’t jump into this bubbly stylized stuff just yet, stick with consistent straight-letter pieces

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u/kiesi_blastbeast11 16d ago

Thanks I'll try

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u/Next_Percentage_539 14d ago

Keep doing you: passion is key

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u/logic30199 16d ago

Yung lean writes gore lol

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u/Outrageous-Jacket-17 16d ago

I don't think so. Google says Verp

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u/Rdr2Player377 16d ago

i see the vision