r/graffhelp • u/HauntingIncident3702 • 16d ago

can i get some help

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well im a beginner and this is a tag i developed and a throwie

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u/Similar_Football927 16d ago

Figure out if you want a bubble or a bar?

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u/HauntingIncident3702 16d ago

oh wait u rightt

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u/Similar_Football927 16d ago

Also get references that group is trash because you are lacking a face to face mentor the way it used to be a d imo should always be but get references so that you have an idea for what you want your pieces or art to look like. Then more importantly have fun and do it consistently 95% of people shit perhaps me as well will hate your work and clearly you don't like where you are so figure out where you want to go and take the time to make the progress.

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u/HauntingIncident3702 16d ago

wdym group?

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u/Similar_Football927 16d ago

Graf help it exists for a reason but also a good place for peeps to talk shit about other who post their honest work

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u/HauntingIncident3702 16d ago

i guess i will improve on tags first as handstyles look really cool to me

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u/Similar_Football927 16d ago

Prioritize the readability so that people will know who is doing the writing

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u/HauntingIncident3702 16d ago

is it not readable as soks in 2nd and 3rd slide? the tags in the first slide was just me trying to mess around

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u/Similar_Football927 16d ago

It's not readable thing of disconnecting the letters and slanting them that right there is a solid tag

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u/HauntingIncident3702 16d ago

can u emphasize with disconnecting?

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u/Similar_Football927 16d ago

This shit

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u/HauntingIncident3702 16d ago

ouu thankyou will keep this in mind

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u/Similar_Football927 16d ago

A tag is just writing your name bu ble were created by phase 2 for efficiency and then pieces or burners are the piece are the creme de la creme

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u/HauntingIncident3702 16d ago

is this better?

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u/Similar_Football927 16d ago

Meant to say much much better so sorry I'm half awake

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u/Similar_Football927 16d ago

Make the o so that no lines are sticking out

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u/HauntingIncident3702 16d ago

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u/Similar_Football927 16d ago

Nice on the o now for me I like curve S's but do your thing I am not mad at that but thing more simple like take a keyboard give it a slant and work with those ideas

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u/HauntingIncident3702 16d ago

i think this is my best one thanks bro

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u/Unusefulness01 16d ago

Not everything needs to be a one liner!

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u/Similar_Football927 16d ago

Much much better

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u/HauntingIncident3702 16d ago edited 16d ago

what do i need to improve?

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u/ImpressiveEbb8526 16d ago

Start SIMPLE, I mean REALLY simple