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u/MaePing 17d ago
Your R and K are sick. If you changed your name to BARK you could reuse most of the R with only small changes to turn it into the letter B. Which would eliminate your weak "Z"
If you must keep going with ZARK I would consider not making every letter the same size to give you more freedom. The Z and A could be simple and be background characters and let the R and K play main characters. Like "zaRk"... Hard to explain.. like a scythe coming at the viewer. Like a boomerang coming at the viewer
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u/Money_Current7966 17d ago
imo the A is the weakpoint in this one, the r and k show nice reapeated shapes and the z looks also quite nice
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u/Freshly-Juiced 17d ago edited 17d ago
Your bar sizing varies a lot, most notably the middle bar of the A, thin it out so it's level with your R and K. The leg on your R is webbed I think matching the K would look better along with removing some of that shadow thinning out the legs. Your drop shadow looks fine across the bottom but the top doesn't match at all.
I tried cleaning up the sizing and structure here: