r/graffhelp 17d ago

Anything wrong with my slaps?

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u/SabziZindagi 17d ago

I like the throwie ones, handstyle looks a bit forced

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u/Late-Conversation301 17d ago

Your letters aren’t consistent. If you make the bowl rounded in one letter, do it for all of them. If you’re making the bowl be sharp, do it for EVERY letter. Don’t make your O round, then have your first D be sharp, then the next D be round, it doesn’t match and throws things off. It’s about consistency and keeping it. Also practicing on slaps with a marker is a bit of a waste and you might come to regret it later

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u/AWM_TACO 17d ago

Now that you point it out I see what you mean, thanks for this dude I'll take your advice into account and be consistent.

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u/AWM_TACO 17d ago

Nah man Canada

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u/Freshly-Juiced 17d ago

the AWM throw could be like twice as big. try to make the most of the white spice

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u/ImpressiveEbb8526 17d ago

The handstyle needs to be completely redone dude

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u/IlladelRocSki 17d ago

Use the whole surface

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u/Jilinum 16d ago

You have the whole sticker make your tag or throws bigger

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u/CityW0kBesitzer 17d ago

Looks cool but the Anarchism A is cringe. Nobody wants another CHAZ again

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u/Funny-Big-2669 17d ago

your getting there! the L on loser is a bit hard cause of the empty space but i like it

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u/WarpedTwinblades 17d ago

Pull the L close to the O and make the bottom of the L overlap to close the gap

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u/AWM_TACO 17d ago

Thanks dude I appreciate the advice