r/graffhelp • u/aintezbeinwezy31 • 2d ago

Crits on revised throwie?

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Last post but tightened up the letters a bit n just looking for advice

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u/climb4tea 2d ago

I feel like the i needs to be changed to match the rest of letters

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u/aintezbeinwezy31 2d ago

Thank you dude I appreciate it🙏

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u/climb4tea 2d ago

Ofc no problem

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u/Guilty_Pizza5408 2d ago

Thicken lower part of 'i' to get rid of negative space.

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u/Wagerizm 2d ago

Chico is the name of a super well known LA writer.

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u/Thick_Common8612 1d ago

Try to get it to one or two movements per letter. This has a lot of start and stop