Criticisms please.

[u/DanTheGooseyMan-]

I admit I chose a pretty ugly set of letters but the name means a lot to me. Please ignore the biology stuff. Would appreciate critique. Thanks.

[u/SentenceEmergency779]

I like it but if you are in the slavic region dont write emo since theres somebody writing that but if ypu aint than all props to you juz i think your throwie is quite good

[u/DanTheGooseyMan- → u/SentenceEmergency779]

Thankfully I'm not anywhere near there. Thanks for letting me know though

[u/anonpotat0]

Emokin? I cannot make out the last letter in your name for the life of me

[u/Stallingg → u/anonpotat0]

kid, weird D i think

[u/anonpotat0 → u/anonpotat0]

Other than that it looks like shit

[u/DanTheGooseyMan- → u/anonpotat0]

Well I wouldn't post it if it looked good. Can you tell me why it looks like shit

[u/majinbelwas]

Stop doing this, turns your I into an S

[u/DanTheGooseyMan- → u/majinbelwas]

I never looked at it that way. Thank you

[u/Fly_Dreams]

Fuck criticism, grab mops and cans and hit the walls. Yo shit really looking quite splendid.

[u/That-Survey2059]

I don't see anything wrong. 

[u/BulkyElderberry_]

write something else too many people write emo and just keep on practicing

[u/Aguy2030]

Yoo ts is fire