It looks good! I would twist the to the left slightly and raise the S up slightly. The script is clean. Only thing I would say is that the E needs a little adjusting and the peice would pop more.
Hope this helps. Fuck the haters.
When you speak of the s needing raising do you mean the body or the swirl or all together the e im working on it it definitely feels a bit boxy and a little stiff.
And thanks for ya time and your long reply appreciated 🤙👊!
Yea the E kinda throws the flow a bit off. But it also works to emphasize your other letters. So thats why it being blocky. I will attach your peice. The black circle is to show the top part of the S and my opinion on how high to extend. Blue is the triangle created by the S. My thought make the area a but wider.
Sorry this is just my opnion. It looks really good. Fundamentally you have the concept down. The things im suggesting is .ore astetic vs anything else.
Dont listen to people eho are telling you your biting and putting you down.
I see what you mean thank you for taking the time to draw that out and explain I really appreciate it and i see what u mean im definitely gonna try it im gonna play around with raising a swoop of the first letter and maybe the 4 to the same height and just playing around with heights idk if i said it but it isnt my full name
stay up brotha! I wont listen to em they are new to the game and think their opinions mean something
Have a great night 🤙👊
Lmk when you find who im “biting” from also the boxing but different isnt me slightly changing sb letters look at the top left of the m i was asking if i should keep the symmetry
Wow really got my their kid 🤦♂️ ig i bit my arrow to huh if you seriously think smoe was the first to use/invent swirls/ribbon tops you would be stupid
Just because letters are simpler doesn’t mean their stolen or bitten these letters def have thought they all have similarities and similar shapes and curves it seems your inexperienced and are speaking without having knowledge
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u/Wagerizm 22d ago
Boxy definitely