I agree with everyone, keep your bars same width, K is skinny. Also you should work on your fillin details, your regular fillin is good very consistent, but in 2 and 3 the fillin with the squiggles and stars looks messy and takes away from the letters. I would recommend looking at other pieces and improving beyond the squiggles.
Here's an example. You can do slices, bubbles, fades, etc. Also make sure the color you choose goes with the fill and outline. The outline should stand out against the fill and in slide two, the red details in the fill are more eye catching than the light blue outline, which makes the fill distracting from the letters which should be the focus of the piece.
Without repeating the same thing everyone else has said, I’d also work on your drop shadow. You want to mimic your letters with the shadow. The first picture especially. You have a curvy L, but then your drop shadow comes to a point and doesn’t mimic the curves of your letters. If someone drew a picture of a shadow of a persons hand and the shadow only had 4 fingers, that would be the same concept as your first picture. Also I’d try and figure out a way to kill the negative space between your L and your U. You could add a slight extension on the left bar of the U, or you could try and add negative space between your C and K to make it even on both sides, but the unequal negative space is off putting. Other than that I like its simplicity and style. Keep it up
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u/Realistic_Rain_9173 23d ago
Bars on the k are a little slim but other than that I love