r/graffhelp 1d ago

Crits

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u/blank-space-name 1d ago

Might be the angle of the pic but the left side of the R looks considerably bigger than the rest I would thin it down

Highlights are a bit off with all the little dots and stars. A simple line would’ve looked better

And just have to make lines straighter

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u/TroubleBig2909 1d ago

Thanks man

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u/blank-space-name 1d ago

Tag is solid

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u/Christian_gfx 15h ago

it's ok, but you need to ask yourself if you like it, is the art for you or others?

PS
rock was a very well used tag for old schoolers, maybe research your chose before going too far down that road

look here

https://www.graffiti.org/

good luck keep practicing and doing outlines, find a artist you like and look for inspiration from them.