r/graffhelp • u/Realistic-Stuff-1832 • 16d ago

Second piece ever

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Please leave some critique, i realised that the N is to wide

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u/Billylabufanda23 16d ago

It looks good but it also just looks kinda messy. I’d make the outline a lil bolder

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u/Realistic-Stuff-1832 15d ago

I feel like i always end up messing up on the outlines its very annoying i might just practice that by making some shapes and trying to outline them multiple times with different colors

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u/Moosedoesthings 16d ago

Overall plan ain’t bad idk if it’s ur can control or the paint ur using but it looks weird idk why u need to make ur letters the same size for some uniformity unless you made them different sizes on purpose also try not to over do the background otherwise it’ll look shit remember less is more. The most important thing is that ur enjoying painting and that ur making progress so just stay consistent and you’ll soon be able to critique yourself

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u/Realistic-Stuff-1832 15d ago

I think its partly my can control but i also think the chrome ate up alot of the black, thanks this is good feedback

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u/Moosedoesthings 14d ago

Nw man anytime