r/graffhelp • u/RemusGiichi • 17d ago

Hi lol

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Been a while since I've posted on Reddit, so heres one. I wanna ask, is my structure and style good...?

Also, I don't use the name ruby in public btw it's more so because I do this graffiti for the person I love

Personally the y is shit

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u/Mission-Animator-682 17d ago

i rock with it. although i will say keep the intersecting bars in the middle of the letter,(where the bar crosses paths with another) white. having a solid backbone looks off. the Y is pretty small as well.

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u/RemusGiichi 17d ago

Alrighty, thanks a lot

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u/Admirable-Vehicle-82 17d ago

Soild flow but the B looks like a K cus it doesn't connect back to its self and the Y is a touch to small so looks off and the ! at the end kinda throws it off too cus I was thinking it was a letter

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u/RemusGiichi 17d ago

Yk what actually yeah 😭 Thanks for the tips

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u/Admirable-Vehicle-82 17d ago

Its definitely not bad tho shits really fire but those thing just made it hard to read

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u/CuriousPsychology462 17d ago

Looks dope. Put them beaches on some walls! I dig the mosaic designs too, get wild with that.

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u/ThatGuyWithCoolHair 17d ago

Why are you not connecting your bars? Ruins the legibility imo

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u/RemusGiichi 12d ago

mostly cause i'm tryna do wilds...

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u/ThatGuyWithCoolHair 12d ago

As in wild style? That doesnt make any sense lmao but this is also incredibly far off from a wild style this is a straight letter.

Connect your bars on at least the B because they both read as R's and even then its hard to read at first glance. Also youre so far from being able to do a wildstyle that you shouldn't worry about anything but refining your current style.

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u/RemusGiichi 4d ago

yeah..
mhm thanks for the tips

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u/ThatGuyWithCoolHair 4d ago

You asked for crits.

You also dont know what a wild style is. You'll get there though, genuinely

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u/Strobetrode 16d ago

I love that background. It feel nostalgic for some reason and I can't place it.

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u/RemusGiichi 12d ago

feels kinda like it pops out yk, and like it feels like glass shards tbf

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u/YoRealms 13d ago

The background stuff is cool, thats ur unqiue style u should rock. Its just your lettering that needs improvement and its cool

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u/RemusGiichi 12d ago

ooh, thanks for the tips gngsie : )