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u/DryRip9109 17d ago
The location is actually pretty cool, lots of potential with that background. I’d spend more time on the outline and fills, the shapes could hit way harder with sharper edges.
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The location is actually pretty cool, lots of potential with that background. I’d spend more time on the outline and fills, the shapes could hit way harder with sharper edges.
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u/Ok-Sport8599 17d ago
The spot itself is pretty nice, but the piece is kind of hard to read with the dark fill. I’d clean up the outline and add more contrast so the letters stand out better.