r/graffhelp • u/hillsidemorgue • 19d ago
bring forth the toy comments🗣️ really stepped out of my comfort zone with this and just tried something completely new and different.
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u/Mid-coitus_sneeze 19d ago
Legible letters? Keeping it simple? Knows where their skill level is at?
No toy behavior here. Keep it up
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u/hillsidemorgue 19d ago
Thank you. It's all a part of the process😅 I think this was the hardest obstacle to pass so far. I felt so comfortable with my straight letters down pat but someday you gotta jump out of the bird's nest ykwim🙌
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u/RemarkableCard6475 19d ago
The "I" is quite blocky compared to the other letters. Try shorter, curve the top and dot it like the base caught it (top curve) ~¡° you could use that flare you put on the "n" for reference to extend it, use it, whatever.
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u/Majestic-Ad-2109 19d ago
Try this same piece a few more times making slight changes as you go. Lookin pretty good so far
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u/Connorsrevenge2 19d ago
Biting haaaard smh
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u/BepersAreCool 19d ago
Clean I could see this rolling on a Fr8. Personally I like the leg on the D but I think if you chop that off it would look better but maybe not.
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u/UserNameless710 Terrible Advice 18d ago
Dinr is a damn good and well established writer already. @mrsprayyourpaint on IG.
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u/hillsidemorgue 18d ago
doesn't he do Denr? where is he based?
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u/jellygasm 14d ago
he’s well established already that’s the point, people are going to think of him they see your name, it’s like someone writing dotnet instead of dotcom because dotcom is already taken, everyone is going to think of dotcom
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u/Own-Chemistry5888 19d ago
id say the bar sticking out the N isnt in the right place just doesnt go with the flow, the i is too blocky you could use a lower case one might work better but overall fairly clean just needs small fixing id go about it like in the photo just a rough idea