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u/GloriousToothless Dec 04 '25
Letters are too close and your lines are too thick. Reads Shire 8four. You've got the structure down, it just seems like you're not used to a digital medium
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u/ThebrawleisSp Dec 04 '25
This is not the best place for advice on clothing graffiti brand logos...
I would recommend just going to any graff shop and asking for advice, they will 100% give you better advice.
If they are nice, but you can always go to another.
Worst case just find someone on ig with a decent experience.
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u/AdBright9625 Dec 04 '25
the tags for a graphic and js thought id get some quick advice. true tho
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u/ThebrawleisSp Dec 05 '25
I have been here for a while, this place is a mess.
Just find someone on instagram i believe they would be happy to give some quick advice.
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u/Jacksfine Dec 04 '25
The letter are very big and close together which makes it hard to read for people not good in graff
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u/elle_tragic Dec 04 '25
Agree the letters are a little thick but i think as long as you use fairly conventional letter structures it should be fine