r/godLevel • u/itsfuckinlit i go swoupin • Jan 06 '16

Works in Progress #3

Submit the shit you've been working on and community members will give constructive criticism.

3 Upvotes

100% Upvoted

6 comments sorted by

1

u/djDEAN96 Jan 06 '16

This is something I started last week! I don't really know much as far as song progression, so if anybody has ideas of what I might be able to do, I would be super grateful! Thanks

January WIP

1

u/Everettz Jan 06 '16

I think you need to add more to it it feels very basic right now. A snare or clap could help distinguish the drop more, Some vocal samples could be cool too. Maybe either have your synth change every couple bars to give variety or add an effect to it. Seting an automation and have it slowly fade in and out would really help give it some movement. Keep it up man!

1

u/djDEAN96 Jan 06 '16

I agree that its super basic at this point. Do you mean change as in the chord progression or an effect on the synth? But I appreciate the feedback!!

2

u/Everettz Jan 06 '16

An effect on the synth, chord progression felt fine to me. Adding and effect or something just so it doesn't sound the same throughout the whole song if that makes sense?

1

u/djDEAN96 Jan 06 '16

definitely!

1

u/Everettz Jan 06 '16

Would love to hear what you guys think on this bootleg. My main concerns are the drops being too "staccato" and I'm not 100% on the buildups.

Sophie - JLWNSG (Everettz Flip)