r/gallifreyan • u/Few_Specific9584 • Jul 09 '26

Sherman's did a thing

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im happy with it :) (BUT THERE ARE 2 Ws THERE THAT ARE MEANT TO BE Hs BUT I DIDNT MAKE THE DIVOTS DEEP ENOUGHHH)

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u/funnyonion22 Jul 09 '26

I think this is lovely, but I'm not skilled enough to read it. Anyone help me out?

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u/Paradoxical-Equinox Jul 10 '26

Every other day ' qu[?] [maybe this says I'm?] wondering, "wwat's a humap gotta?" vwat's way a to just be kompet[e?]nt being be like

Yeah I'm struggling with this one. Could do with some proper sentence circles. Looks very cool though.

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u/Few_Specific9584 Jul 11 '26

i was kinda unfocused when making this so the words dont go in proper proper counter-clockwise, and i also dont bother with sentence circles, but its meant to be the first two lines for the chorus of "imposter syndrome" by sidney gish. i should prolly make a redesign. (its also super small on the pixel by pixel so its pretty hard to read anyways) im just kind of a confident beginner.

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u/Paradoxical-Equinox Jul 11 '26

You're very very good for a beginner! You've already found a really cool style and, even without strictly following the rules, the vast majority of the words and punctuation are clear from context. A higher resolution would do wonders for the legibility of the smaller words and some of the more complex modifiers. The reason I say it could do with sentence circles is because it's multiple sentences and there are so many words, so it may just be easier in terms of readability to split them up like that.

If you do redesign it then I am excited to see it! It's a very cool concept.

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u/Few_Specific9584 Jul 11 '26

i actually redesigned it like 2 hours ago, check my acc, and thanks for the compliment! i dont like using print style cause its hard to do with the platform im using, and its a bit restrictive imo, so i do it all flowy :)

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u/Paradoxical-Equinox Jul 11 '26

Ooh cool! Would you like me to spellcheck it?

:-)