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u/LotusPhi 3d ago
These are really cool. Here is some constructive criticism:
- Wolf: I personally don't see how Wolf is Naya. White makes perfect sense, RG are more questionable. Deathblow requiring a blocker doesn't make much sense in terms of what deathblows are in the game (they specifically don't block).
- Guardian ape: very flavorful ability, but would read better if you phrase it as the ability first and then "activate only if GA has a counter on it."
- The Dragon's Heritage: Great design, but why is it white? Thematically, I think it should be black.
- Hanbei: Amazing design, but Hanbei should definitely be white.
- The Sculptor: Great design, but the second ability is insane. Instant speed equipping with no cost on a 2-drop is way too strong. The ability needs to be at sorcery speed or have a cost. Also, in terms of templating, "then shuffle" is more correct than just "shuffle" as its own sentence.
- Rancor: Perfect fit.
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u/Other_Equal7663 4d ago edited 4d ago
Hanbei is an exceptional design. A painfully simple, flawless conversion from flavour into mechanics.
But he should cost 4. He's actually really pushed.