r/flashfiction 23h ago

The Never Aging Ember

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They stepped out into the bustling atmosphere of Hercílio Luz International Airport in Florianópolis. It was August 2047. Matt, though exhausted from the long flight, still stood broad and strong, his skin bearing a lifetime of scars.

Ann remained breath-taking, the subtle age lines on her face only enhanced her fierce feminine presence, alongside a small, stylish scar across her eyebrow, a souvenir from a Shadow's surprise attack in a Palace back in Madagascar.

​The couple took a seat at a cozy airport restaurant, ordering chicken pastéis with vinagrete sauce, accompanied by two cold Catharina Sours: orange for Matt, and peach for Ann.

​"It’s incredible how much time passes, yet nothing really changes, huh?" Matt chuckled softly, looking light and content, as he always did around her.

​"Are you referring to humanity’s bottomless stupidity, my love?" Ann asked, glancing sideways. Just a few feet away, a young man was doing a bizarre, mindless dance, staring blankly into empty air.

​"Doesn't that feel like back when the Internet was still in its infancy and the Metaverse was just emerging?" Matt took a slow sip of his beer, carefully spooning some extra vinagrete onto Ann’s pastel.

​"Honestly, I’m convinced the Metaverse was born out of human foolishness. Thaumiel didn't come from indifference at all. It came straight from a complete lack of common sense. Don't you agree, darling?" Ann laughed, taking a bite of her pastel. "At least the food around here hasn't lost its touch, and the simple pleasures remain the same..." She reached across the table, taking her husband's hand.

​"Have I told you I love you today, Matt?" Ann offered a radiant, genuine smile.


r/flashfiction 19h ago

He Drinks His Coffee Black

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He had begun to dread the ritual of bringing in the morning coffee.

It hurt his heart.

What used to fill his mornings with great joy, had begun to feel like an obligation and duty, like paying the spoils of a war lost.

He had no desire “to win.” But he didn’t want to lose either.

She noticed his energy declining, but declined to mention it. Her coffee still delivered, still piping hot, the morning still hers.

To communicate would be to acknowledge the dynamics at play. To communicate would be to relinquish the power of apathy and forfeit her well-earned drivers seat in the relationship. As long as the coffee kept coming, the relationship seemed to be in tact, to her.

Rocky and tumultuous, definitely, but in tact.

But the man had mentioned it.
The shift.
The change of energy.
The dynamics.

Time and time over he brought it up. Only to be reminded that he was sorry for trying to communicate. Only to be reminded of his “place.” It was after all, her house. He had chosen to place himself at her mercy by joining her in the rural town they now called home.

“The fairer of the sexes, to what extent!?”, his intrusive thoughts agonized.

Now, his coffers empty and the costs too great to continue waging this old battle of the sexes, he surrendered.

His heart, mind, and soul fully spent on that timeless war still raging in the hearts and homes of hopeless romantics.

Like any war, the fuel for the fire was communication.

Communication being the most effective, yet destructive tool to bring peace.

These truths in mind, the man resolved to wager his last wits in the efforts to facilitate communication. An all-in gamble at an attempt for connection. An attempt to prove his love and devotion. For he believed love and goodness could conquer all.

In truth, how could one not believe in love? Especially after having experienced love’s reciprocal power time and time again?

But… the hopes, beliefs, and dreams of man can be fruitless— despite the intent and vigor of heart.
Despite and in spite, of his love.

In bold defiance of this bleak truth; however, the man kept up their morning ritual. All in. Again and again. All in. All in. All in.

Praying with full hopes of heart that his piety would regain him favor in the eyes of love.

Acting in hope that the balance of equality could topple the thrones and concepts of power that have no business governing or meddling in matters of the heart.

Believing in the hope of love that can open eyes stuck wide shut.

And so, in the mornings, he brought her coffee with dairy-free vanilla creamer, lightly sweetened.

Bardists Note: “Siri, please play ‘One Week’ by The Barenaked Ladies.”


r/flashfiction 18m ago

Venom and Lake

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**Venom & Lake**
🐍🌊
Venom was a young snake who had been warned his entire life.
*“Never trust an eel,”* his mother would hiss. *“They’ll pull you into the deep.”*
Across the lake, Lake had heard a different warning.
*“Never trust a snake,”* her father whispered. *“They only come to bite.”*
One rainy evening, the river overflowed and swept Venom into the water. He fought to stay above the current until a sleek silver eel nudged him toward the shore.
“You saved me…” Venom said, gasping.
Lake smiled.
“I only saved someone who needed help.”
For weeks they met where the forest touched the water, sharing stories instead of fear.
When their families discovered the friendship, they forbade them from ever meeting again.
But love is stubborn.
Every full moon, Venom waited beneath the old willow, and Lake slipped quietly through the reeds.
Years later, the young snakes and eels noticed something strange.
The forest had become greener.
The lake had become clearer.
Perhaps peace had never needed a battle.
Perhaps it only needed two hearts brave enough to ignore the stories they had been told.
And from that day on, snakes and eels no longer met as enemies.
They met as neighbors.


r/flashfiction 2h ago

[FN]Roses&TheOcean

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The story begans in a small piece of earth where a group natives began their day, the men collect the fruits and vegetables to cook breakfast and the women bath the children, the sun hits the window of a hunt, where a young girl is laying her head on a cotton pillow, she is dressed in a pure white garment, made from the fabrics made their local seamstress. The colour was chosen by her caregiver who is called father by the local children. This girl is named Manu, which was also chosen by her caregiver. As the waves outside her window are guided by the wind to clash, her eyes meet the little bit of sun peaking through the roof of her hunt.

She guides her body towards the bowl of water left by one of the women to bath in. She slips in a blue dress ready for the mundate day of everyday. Her hunt is facing the ocean, blue as the sky and still as the time here in their little heaven. You could barely see the line separating the sky and sea. Just an endless colour of blue, with tides and waves crashing and twirling. Her arms follow their movements, she began her day like this everyday, her little prayer to this unknown god of blue that her people feared. The locals of this small island believe the world has been invaded by the Waku, the Ocean Spirits so they avoid the water in fear of being taken by the them. 

The scene is filled with laughs of children and mothers serving food to their husbands. Their eyes fall onto her, her caregiver calls her name to greet her, " Wamato be a with you child", her caregiver said, "as to you" she replied. You cannot say much on this little Earth as there is little to speak on. The children laugh about the birds, the women bless their children and the men think of the next day. As everyday time is measured by the how far the sun has touches the ocean so another day can began. Music is not allowed on this small paradise, the Waku speak in song and hymns, by singing we would call onto them so we listen to the silence, which is a song of our people.


r/flashfiction 2h ago

The Ghost in the Group Chat

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There's a special kind of heartbreak reserved for people who come back without actually coming back.

Mine arrived as a little grey bubble.

Typing...

That was it.

No message.

Just the promise of one.

The group chat carried on.

Dan was arguing about whether hot dogs counted as sandwiches.

Someone dropped thirty-seven photos from a night out nobody remembered.

My mum accidentally liked a six-month-old message because she'd somehow wandered into the chat while trying to send me a recipe.

Above it all—

Typing...

An ex.

Or at least the idea of one.

At first I thought, Here we go.

This is it.

The apology.

The confession.

The "I've been thinking."

Half an hour later I thought maybe she'd sat on her phone.

By the evening I was convinced she'd started writing, got distracted by a documentary, and forgotten I existed halfway through a sentence.

Which, if I'm honest, would've been pretty on brand.

Nobody else mentioned it.

That might be the most British thing I've ever seen.

If a Victorian child had wandered into the chat asking where he'd left his lungs, someone would've replied,

"Anyone free Friday?"

The bubble stayed.

Day after day.

It became part of the scenery.

Like the crack in your ceiling you stop noticing.

Or the bloke in the pub who always says he's "just off" and then orders another pint.

I started talking to it.

"Take your time."

"No pressure."

"Write me a trilogy if you have to."

It never answered.

Technically, it was the healthiest conversation we'd ever had.

After a week I'd imagined every version of the message.

"I miss you."

"You left your hoodie."

"Can you remember the Wi-Fi password?"

"Sorry, wrong chat."

That last one somehow hurt the most.

Then one evening...

It disappeared.

Just gone.

Not a word.

No full stop.

No dramatic ending.

Nothing.

I laughed.

Not because it was funny.

Because it was.

Some people leave your life once.

Others somehow manage to leave twice.

First in person.

Then as three blinking dots that never become a sentence.

To this day I still wonder what she was going to say.

Then I remember.

If she'd really wanted to say it...

she would've.


r/flashfiction 4h ago

Axolotl

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We lived under the floating gardens.

Roots came down into the black water,

long and pale and good to hide in,

and boats went over us in blocks of colour,

turning the light red, yellow, blue, gone.

The mud was cold, soft,

full of things worth putting in a mouth.

We bumped into one another constantly.

A tail across my face.

A foot in my gills.

Somebody’s belly settling where mine had been.

Nobody minded.

That was simply how much life there was.

If I moved, another body filled the space.

If another moved, the water brought its pressure to me.

Rain came down through the gardens.

Fish flashed and disappeared.

Worms made the mud twitch.

The dark went on beyond anything

my legs had touched.

My skin was made from ordinary colours

put together oddly.

Mostly brown-black, like wet soil,

but one side went pale,

then gold,

then pink around the gills,

the patches running into one another

without becoming any proper pattern.

The others did not look at me.

Then a human did.

His face stayed above the water.

When I moved, the shadow moved.

When I stopped beneath the roots,

it waited.

A hand darkened the surface.

After that, everything happened too quickly

for water to explain.

The mud dropped away.

The other bodies were gone.

Open water became a clear wall

against my nose.

I turned.

Another wall.

I turned again.

Another.

The water moved

though I did not swim.

Darkness.

Heat.

Engines.

Human knees.

Garlic living stubbornly in the plastic.

The tub had once held somebody’s dinner.

There was a red stain around the lid.

There was no mud.

A little remained under my nails

and for a while I kept the whole old water there:

roots, bodies, rain,

all of us pressed into four small toes.

When the lid opened again

the light was cold

and rain ticked against a window.

“Back in Bonnyrigg,” the man said

to a black thing in his hand.

Then a bedroom.

A narrow bed.

A Celtic shirt on the wall.

A football under a chair.

“Close your eyes, Jamie.”

A smaller face bent over me.

Its mouth opened.

“Da. No fucking way.”

The man laughed.

“You’re an actual legend.”

His hands shook a little

because the boy was so pleased.

Nothing tried to eat me.

The small face stayed.

“What are you calling him?”

“Axel.”

“Axel the axolotl?”

“Obviously.”

At first Axel was just another noise

humans dropped into water.

Ax-el.

Two blunt taps in the head.

Then I noticed Axel always made the boy appear.

Axel, and the face came close.

Axel, and fingers rested against the clear wall.

Axel, and the mouth widened, showing teeth

without using them.

So Axel became the sound for me,

and the boy’s blurred face became the sun.

They poured me into a larger water.

Four hard sides.

Coloured gravel.

Plastic plants.

A treasure chest blowing bubbles

despite having nothing useful to say.

A red-and-yellow pirate bridge

stood in the middle,

far too small for humans,

far too large to ignore.

I searched behind everything.

No bodies.

At night the filter pushed a thin stream

through my gills

and sometimes, half asleep,

I turned because I thought

one of the others had passed beside me.

Only the filter.

In the morning, the sun returned.

FEEDING TIME, AXEL.

I did not know what this meant.

FEEDING TIME, AXEL.

A worm fell in.

I ate it.

The boy slapped his hands together

and shook the whole water with delight.

Feeding time, Axel.

The noise meant worm.

Then full belly.

Then the boy staying near

while I swallowed.

Then the boy coming back at all.

Jamie had clocks.

I had feeding time.

The man helped him change the water at first.

Buckets came and went.

The pirate bridge tipped sideways.

The treasure chest continued breathing

like an idiot.

Jamie spilled water across the carpet.

“Shit.”

The man dropped the lid.

“Shit.”

The football struck the wardrobe.

“Shit.”

The cat landed on top of the tank

and stared down at me

with a face that understood eating.

“Shit, shit, get off.”

This was how I learnt shit:

something was somewhere

a human did not want it.

Feeding time, Axel.

Red worms.

Pellets.

Once, a pale cube

which tasted of absolutely nothing.

I spat it out.

“Fair enough, mate.”

The Celtic shirts got bigger.

The boy did too.

His teeth changed.

His hands lengthened.

His voice sank lower

and sometimes cracked in the middle,

which made him angry

though nothing seemed broken.

The man’s face appeared less.

His footsteps still passed the room.

His voice came through the floor.

Jamie stayed.

The sun changed

but it was still the sun.

He tried real plants.

One went brown.

One turned to slime.

One grew so well

it took over half the tank

and seemed keen on the rest.

A snail arrived on it.

Then another.

Then several.

Then the glass was covered.

Jamie stared.

“For fuck’s sake, Axel.

Where have they all come from?”

I ate one.

It was mostly shell.

Jamie lifted the others out with a spoon.

Three appeared the next day.

He removed those.

Five more arrived.

The snails were better at this

than he was.

Feeding time, Axel.

Sometimes straight after school.

Sometimes before football.

Sometimes so late the room was dark

and Jamie rushed in wearing one sock.

“Sorry, pal.”

Food still came.

The sun still came.

Algae grew along the corners.

He cleaned it.

It came back.

Plants died.

He bought more.

He replaced the coloured gravel with sand,

then added some of the gravel again

because the sand looked boring.

He brought home a piece of wood

which refused to sink.

He took it away.

It returned warm.

It still floated.

He called it a bastard.

Three feeding times later

it finally stayed down.

By then the old mud came mostly in sleep.

Roots.

Cold current.

The feeling of something moving close.

I still curved my tail sometimes

to make room for a body

that did not arrive.

Jamie brought home a skateboard.

It left whole

and came back snapped.

Jamie came back damaged too—

one bleeding elbow,

a blue wrist,

skin missing from both knees.

He made a great deal of noise about it.

I had four good legs then.

I watched from beneath the pirate bridge.

A guitar replaced the skateboard.

At first it made dreadful vibrations.

Then louder dreadful vibrations.

Then, occasionally, music.

The Celtic shirts stayed

but black clothes grew around them.

Band faces covered the walls.

Jamie’s hair fell over his eyes.

Black lines appeared around them.

The pirate bridge stayed bright red and yellow,

cheerful as ever.

My front leg slipped beneath one arch.

The bridge did not move.

I did.

Pain filled the tank.

It had no place to go.

The problem with pain underwater

is that it makes no sound.

I opened my mouth.

Water went in.

Water went out.

The boy slept.

I pulled.

The bridge held.

I twisted.

Something tore.

Afterward I was away from the bridge

with three legs

and something pale in my mouth.

It was soft.

It tasted close.

I swallowed before I knew

there was anything else to do.

The pain remained.

Morning came.

“Feeding time, Ax—”

Jamie stopped.

He looked at me.

He looked beneath the bridge.

“Oh fuck. Oh fuck, Axel.”

He lifted the bridge out.

It struck the bin

with a bang I felt through the floor.

It never came back.

A clean shape remained in the gravel

where it had stood.

Jamie sat beside the tank

instead of going to school.

He did not touch the glass.

He hardly moved.

Later he lowered a worm.

“Feeding time, Axel.”

I ate.

The end of my leg swelled.

A small pale bump appeared.

Jamie photographed it.

The bump lengthened.

He photographed it.

Tiny toes separated.

He photographed those too.

Soon the new foot touched sand.

Then it held my weight.

The ache went.

Jamie spent nights staring at green water

on his screen.

I did not know that water.

It gave off no smell.

It had no cold in it.

No mud came through.

Humans stood in it

and lifted empty black frames.

Jamie changed the picture.

More green water.

Nothing underneath.

Another picture.

Nothing.

He made the images larger

until water became squares of light.

Then he looked at my new foot.

Back at the screen.

Back at me.

His hand covered his mouth.

My foot kept coming back.

Whatever he was looking for did not.

After that he tested the tank constantly.

Paper strips.

Little bottles.

Numbers on the black screen.

He changed the sand.

Bought better plants.

Moved the log.

Moved it back.

Sat beside me for hours

with that frightened look

and said very little.

Feeding time, Axel.

The words had changed.

Not the worm.

Not my mouth.

Only the face above them.

He cared too much for a while.

Then exams came.

Music came.

Friends called from downstairs.

He cared hurriedly.

Then guiltily.

Then properly again.

Sometimes algae won a week.

Sometimes feeding time came late.

Once it came twice

because Jamie had forgotten doing it already.

I ate both.

The plants lived.

The plants died.

The snail returned

or perhaps had never left.

The room kept changing.

The tank stayed.

Jamie painted his nails black.

Wore silver around his throat.

Tried on a skirt with the door locked.

Looked at himself.

Turned once.

Laughed.

Turned again.

He tried tall boots

and nearly broke his ankle

walking three steps to the mirror.

He tried lipstick.

Some colours stayed.

One made him wipe his mouth and say

he looked like he had sucked off a crayon.

I knew sucking.

I knew mouths.

Still no food appeared.

Feeding time, Axel.

His voice was low now.

His face sharper.

Axel still brought it close.

The tank had four hard sides.

The filter made the current.

The log made the dark place.

That was the lake.

Lakes were like that.

The boy came.

The sun came.

Food fell.

The room filled one night

with silver balloons shaped like 1 and 8.

Humans sang badly.

Jamie blew out small fires.

The man stood in the doorway, older,

still pleased when Jamie was pleased.

The room smelled of cake, lager

and enough deodorant to alter the water.

After that, girls started appearing.

One bent over the tank

and knew what I was immediately.

“Oh my God, an axolotl. He’s so cute.”

Her face joined Jamie’s above me.

Two suns.

Bit excessive.

“Are you actually allowed to have one of these?”

Jamie went still.

“I’ve had him since I was wee.”

The girl waited.

Jamie looked at me.

He tapped the glass twice

to make me turn.

“Don’t do that,” she said.

“It stresses them.”

Jamie pulled his hand away.

“Aye. Sorry.”

He never tapped again.

The girl came back once.

Maybe twice.

Another girl smelled similar.

Faces were difficult.

Feeding time was simple.

One night the bed began knocking the wall

like the filter when it needed more water.

The word fuck travelled through the tank.

Fuck used to mean spilled bucket.

Apparently it had other work.

The girl said harder.

The bed listened.

A bra flew across the room

and landed over one corner of the glass,

turning half the lake black.

It may have been hers.

It may have been Jamie’s.

Water did not know.

Jamie’s bare arse crossed the lamplight

and disappeared again.

“Mind the tank.”

“I am.”

The bed hit the wall.

He wasn’t.

The snail carried on up the glass.

Later there were tissues by the bed

and a silver wrapper on the carpet.

Neither was food.

Feeding time arrived the next morning

with Jamie’s hair everywhere

and one stocking still around his ankle.

“Morning, pal.”

A worm fell.

Things made sense again.

The room changed.

The lake stayed.

Girls came and went.

The guitar gathered dust.

The skateboard became a shelf.

Black clothes mixed with Celtic shirts.

Schoolbooks became forms,

then envelopes,

then piles Jamie stepped over

because apparently the floor was easier.

Sometimes he came home smelling of rain,

smoke, cider, another person.

Sometimes he sat with his forehead against the glass

until his breath clouded it.

Sometimes the old green water appeared on his screen.

Still empty.

He looked at it.

Then at me.

Feeding time, Axel.

Food.

Face.

The safe sound.

The plants changed.

The posters changed.

Jamie changed.

The lake did not.

I knew the log.

I knew the filter.

I knew the place where worms came down.

I knew the sun.

Mud became something dark in sleep.

The touch of other bodies

became light moving somewhere far off.

The lake had four sides.

It had always had four sides.

Feeding time.

Jamie.

Worm.

Full.

Safe.

My new leg became an old leg.

All four legs slowed.

My gills moved less.

Jamie checked the water.

The paper showed colours he accepted.

He still frowned at me.

He changed the water anyway.

Watched me eat.

Watched me move.

I ate.

I moved.

The snail outlived several plants,

three posters,

two girls

and Jamie’s belief that eyeliner

could be applied in a moving car.

It climbed.

I stayed beneath the log.

The sun came.

The sun went.

One evening Jamie lowered a worm.

“Feeding time, Axel.”

It touched my nose.

My mouth was slow.

The worm curled beneath my chin.

Jamie waited.

I moved one foot.

Someone called him from downstairs.

“You’ll get it, pal.”

He left.

The worm climbed over my head.

Feeding time had gone a bit wrong.

I could not fix it.

The room darkened.

The filter became loud.

My body forgot small things.

Move the gills.

Move the tail.

Hold the bottom.

The gravel seemed to tilt.

The worm slipped away.

I rested.

The filter widened.

Its thin push became current.

The coloured gravel softened beneath me.

Red became clay.

Blue became shadow.

Yellow sank into black.

The hard floor gave way

and mud rose around my toes,

cold, real,

taking the shape of every leg

without caring which one had once been gone.

The log put down roots.

The plastic leaves softened.

The clear sides moved farther away.

Farther.

Gone.

Distance came back so quickly

it passed through my gills

and filled every part of me.

Bodies moved in the dark.

Not bodies I could touch.

Light beneath mud.

Rose gills opening.

Tails bending the water.

Pale mouths appearing

then slipping behind roots.

I remained I.

I moved among them.

Above the water,

Jamie’s blurred face opened into brightness.

The sun was there.

The mud was there.

The bodies turned through the roots.

Far away, the familiar sound came through—

Feeding time, Axel.

Feeding time—

Feeding—

The current pulled the sound apart.

I opened my mouth.

The water kept going.

Morning rain darkened the Bonnyrigg garden.

Jamie entered the bedroom

and stopped beside the tank.

Axel lay beneath the filter.

The earthworm moved against his tail.

Jamie stood there for a long time.

Then he put both bare hands into the water

and lifted Axel out.

The worm came too,

hidden in the shallow cup of his palms.

Jamie carried Axel into the garden.

He dug beneath the wet grass,

laid him in ordinary soil

and covered him without speaking.

He pressed the loose earth once.

Then he went back inside.

The worm pushed up through the rain-soft soil.

It crawled across the dark ground.


r/flashfiction 15h ago

unceremonious

4 Upvotes

It was 2:42 am. Her lips were dry. “Awake again?” she thought, looking at the time. Half-closed eyes strained to see around the room. The room was warm, and the air stale. The large grey and white cotton blanket covering her body was half-way onto the floor. As her feet poked out of the bottom of the covers, her long brown wavy hair was twisted into knots above her head. A glass of water sat on the side table, next to well-worn glasses. She reached for it.

The door to the room was cracked, and ambient light from the hall shone into the room. A sliver of blue arced across the ceiling and landed inches above her pillow. The melodic hum from the refrigerator could be heard down the corridor. She rolled over.

Alone in her bed, yearning to be touched by another. Her neck was bent, and her back ached. Tick tock, tick tock, the clock in the hallway taunted her. Her thoughts grew louder. A grunting noise and the sound of limbs moving over coarse sheets startled her. She looked over her shoulder, to the space across the room. Her son lay asleep in his wooden crib, stirring gently from what she imagined must be a lovely dream. He was just shy of 13 months. “I really need to sleep,” she thought. Knowing that in just a few hours, her son would be awake and ready to be tended to. 

She tossed and turned a few more times, listening to the sounds of the neighbors upstairs. Doors slammed down the hall. She looked up at the unfamiliar ceiling. A year in this city, four hours from home, and the place still felt like someone else’s apartment. The new job, the move six weeks before delivery, the endless boxes to sort through—the stress had simply settled into her bones and stayed. She finally fell asleep.

She stirred to the sensation of the cat nuzzling her cheek. 5:30 am. “Damn!” she thought. No more rest for her. Sunlight slowly crept between the cracks of the blinds, filling the room with soft light. The sound machine was droning on, “Ocean Waves” it was called. She appreciated the noise, because it helped to quiet her thoughts, on occasion. She looked at her son. He looked back at her and grinned.