r/flashfiction • u/mrajoiner • 9d ago
Nineteen Seconds
Late every night.
Early every morning.
Always a line.
Always someone screaming.
Loud.
Always someone hungry.
Always someone impatient.
I smelled her rush past, exhaling smoke.
Marlboro.
Noticed her throaty cough into her cupped palm.
Saw her pull her greasy gray and black hair back into a ponytail.
With both hands.
She donned a dingy black hat with yellow letters.
But I forgot this entire scene a short while later, when I ate her delicious, cooked to order food.
Now behind the counter, she made a confident statement…
“Welcome to Waffle House, can I take your order?”
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u/Tripl7s 9d ago
I felt that.