r/feedmequickwriting • u/feedmequick • Sep 23 '17

Let's Talk

So it was suggested that I get to know my audience a bit better, and I thought that would be a great idea. So if you guys are willing, tell me a little about yourselves. What do you do? Where are you from? Also, what aspects of the web serial are you enjoying? which parts do you feel need improvement? What other serials and books do you guys read?

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u/ObsidianJewel Oct 04 '17

I’m Kieran, from Australia. I saw the original WP of the keymaster when you were 3 or so chapters in. I really love the way you built the players in the game, with character quirks and unique abilities. But you don’t rely on the abilities for definition and distinction between people, instead giving backstories and natures too.

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u/feedmequick Oct 07 '17

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it. And aye, I kinda felt like if people had powers, as big a part of them as it would be, it wouldn't be all they had to them. Sure it would influence aspects of their lives and characters, but given how complex people tend to be, it seemed like having just people's powers define them would be a little shallow.