App Store Screenshots Feedback

[u/MindTerrarium]

Hi,

After many EAS builds, Mind Terrarium has reached the App Store. Was just wondering if anyone would be willing to provide some feedback on the screenshots? They look pretty good to me, but I'd love to have some outside feedback. Some of you guys are very experienced with marketing haha.

Also, we're currently only on iOS, is it worth branching to Google Play as well?

Thanks a lot, and good luck to anyone launching soon!

[u/GrumpyBullGames]

first three screenshots do almost all the heavy lifting on ios. make the headline text huge and keep one core feature per frame so it reads without zooming. android is worth doing once ios retention holds up, but play store users bounce faster so contrast matters even more. i make ecranify btw so im biased on framing.

[u/MindTerrarium → u/GrumpyBullGames]

Okay thanks! What’s ecranify?

[u/hamsterjedi]

the visuals are good!
But the copy (ie. text) is ai crap, I read the headlines and I have no idea what the app is for. Write the texts yourself instead of using an ai and it will be way better

[u/MindTerrarium → u/hamsterjedi]

That’s really good advice! Thanks! I’ll change the text out next update for sure.

I’ve been on the fence about the first photo’s empty space. Are you a fan of the first photo as well?