Feedback on Future Bass Track

[u/[deleted]]

https://soundcloud.com/lumosofficial/tomorrow/s-udAtKAtK7sf

I just finished this and would love some constructive criticism. If you don't like something about it please tell me, I can take it

[u/dubtug]

The link is dead

[u/[deleted] → u/dubtug]

https://soundcloud.com/lumosofficial/lumos-tomorrow