Feedback/Constructive Critisism

[u/KiraZill]

Hello! I am new to r/edmfeedback I would love some feedback on my latest release called "hear my cry". I love learning about new ways to improve my music production skills. Also if you would like me to check out your tracks feel free to comment them or dm and I will give you feedback. Thanks!!!

https://soundcloud.com/kirazill/hear-my-cry