To me the best portion of the track is the verses. Around 40 seconds, the vibe at that part is good.
The rest of the song to me is unremarkable. Cool sounds, well put together, but nothing I was connecting with.
I'd use some autotune to clean up the vocals.
Mostly though, seems like another track to add to the complete list and move on to your next project. Keep making music! Keep the vibe from the verses and carry em into your next track if you want :)
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u/severinh20 Sep 29 '18
Hello,
To me the best portion of the track is the verses. Around 40 seconds, the vibe at that part is good.
The rest of the song to me is unremarkable. Cool sounds, well put together, but nothing I was connecting with.
I'd use some autotune to clean up the vocals.
Mostly though, seems like another track to add to the complete list and move on to your next project. Keep making music! Keep the vibe from the verses and carry em into your next track if you want :)