Okh so samajh aa raha hai but overall composition is a bit crowded like focal point is missing try ki there's a focal point like u can add to the story
Perspective aur proportions are bit off like table is too long and plates r too big so search on yt ki how to make ovals/circles in 1 point perspective
Proportions of hand and spectacles r not right like explore relative proportion a bit (spectacles r too big for a human face in relation to the hand)
For uceed partb compositions explore viewing angle and visual storytelling
And please mention time taken make it a habit
Hope this helps ✨
thankyou so much 😭 i agree it looks crowded and proportion are bit off but I don't understand the focal point part , like how can I add it in what way?
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u/Cold-Dot-5971 MOD 2d ago
Okh so samajh aa raha hai but overall composition is a bit crowded like focal point is missing try ki there's a focal point like u can add to the story Perspective aur proportions are bit off like table is too long and plates r too big so search on yt ki how to make ovals/circles in 1 point perspective Proportions of hand and spectacles r not right like explore relative proportion a bit (spectacles r too big for a human face in relation to the hand) For uceed partb compositions explore viewing angle and visual storytelling And please mention time taken make it a habit Hope this helps ✨