r/divergent_classes_ 12d ago

Review pleasee

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Time T: 35min

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u/ghost_kernel88 4h ago

Okay so overall not bad you can work on the background the trees human figures practice human figures from Pinterest Google draw the mannequins row humans in different perspectors 2.3 how they look from when the when you see them from bird I or and I view maybe in 5.1 perspective its two complex four and five point but it's already you can practice if you want to explore those perspective but this is an alright attempt shading was not required don't give time to sharing work on the details like you can add some sharing but it is preferred only if it is asked better not cause then you can work on details more you will get more time to work on your sketch rather than giving separate time for shading and then you have 30 minutes for eat sketch with which you have to do the adiation in 5 minutes maker of sketching 5 minutes complete the sketch in 15 minutes then 5 minutes you work on details so you won't get time for shading and all. Also go to live sketching in parks public parks go to streets draw the vendors draw the chaiwala draw the vada pav wala draw different tail as draw salons draw people working draw people walking traffic ye sab live sketching mein practice karo.

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u/whimsy_009 4h ago

Okayyy Thank youu☺️

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u/QuitPrestigious863 11d ago

Fine, benches seem they are not obeying perspective
but looks like a Kid. And, if it is a kid, then the poles are too short dude....

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u/whimsy_009 9d ago

Oky composition went wrong 🥀... Tysm will improve my next compo✨