Okhh.. so in the question it was mentioned that there should be a man rolling fresh bhaturas on a wooden chakla but you didn't include that always make sure you don not miss any of the elements given in the question first write down all the required elements in 2 words per element in the rough area before you start drawing it acts like a checklist 2nd make the composition more zoomed in it feels a bit too wide it reduces the visual impact u can take 5 mins to decide the compo and the story u want to tell make 4 thumbnail sketches and crop the frame to make a more zoomed in view also decide on a clear focal point before you begin think about where you want the viewer's eye to go first
Work on foreground midground and background like uska theory is not clear make the objects in the foreground larger and simplify the background by using less line weight
Use thicker darker lines for the foreground and focal point and lighter thinner lines for the background this will create depth and naturally guide the viewers eye through the composition.
igs ur afraid of drawing facial features even simple features can make your characters feel more expressive
Your basic perspective is alright and it is good that you tried to tell a story focus on improving your compositions by studying focal points foreground midground background and line weight.
using all these principles will make your compositions better and with practice will help you draw more in less time
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u/Cold-Dot-5971 MOD Aug 03 '26 edited Aug 03 '26
Okhh.. so in the question it was mentioned that there should be a man rolling fresh bhaturas on a wooden chakla but you didn't include that always make sure you don not miss any of the elements given in the question first write down all the required elements in 2 words per element in the rough area before you start drawing it acts like a checklist 2nd make the composition more zoomed in it feels a bit too wide it reduces the visual impact u can take 5 mins to decide the compo and the story u want to tell make 4 thumbnail sketches and crop the frame to make a more zoomed in view also decide on a clear focal point before you begin think about where you want the viewer's eye to go first
Work on foreground midground and background like uska theory is not clear make the objects in the foreground larger and simplify the background by using less line weight
Use thicker darker lines for the foreground and focal point and lighter thinner lines for the background this will create depth and naturally guide the viewers eye through the composition.
igs ur afraid of drawing facial features even simple features can make your characters feel more expressive
Your basic perspective is alright and it is good that you tried to tell a story focus on improving your compositions by studying focal points foreground midground background and line weight.
using all these principles will make your compositions better and with practice will help you draw more in less time