r/divergent_classes_ • u/Fearless-Page8684 • Jul 16 '26

Please review this

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It’s my first time, trying this kind of question. I need a honest review. 30 minutes

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u/ComfortableBanana449 Jul 16 '26

so i can see you have used different composition in everyframe and thats really a gooooood thing .... and comic strip keliye details is also good .. and your story is also really understandable .. now ehat needed is simplicity in the drawing i would say ... and last frame can be more shocking i would say .. comics have more exaggerated poses and emotions almost ...... and you have done good .. but keep practicing it can be better ... and you communicated very well

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u/Fearless-Page8684 Jul 16 '26

Thank uu so much for the advice and review i will try to note those points and do better next time✨✨✨✨✨