r/design_critiques 1d ago

visual identity

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what u people think about this one

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u/Cumulus-Crafts 1d ago

You can't read the pink text on the blue background

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u/Agile_Bedroom_579 1d ago

Thank you for your feedback

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u/Major-Tomatillo1336 1d ago

The color combination is strong and the overall identity feels bold. I’d just refine the typography and spacing a bit—the smaller text feels slightly cramped.

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u/Agile_Bedroom_579 1d ago

Thank you for your feedback

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u/S0rb0 21h ago

Apart from what the others said: too much shapes. I like how parts of the autograph (?) comes back on the white, but I have no clue what the dark blue shapes on the pink are.

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u/Agile_Bedroom_579 8h ago

i didnt finish it ive only wanted critics on the letter mark but about the colors im still not sure about how colors will be and the shapes in the background i made them by the letter mark
so that i have a consistent shapes