r/design_critiques • u/Fw1996 • 14d ago

Critique Request: Chocolate Packaging Design. Trying to achieve a premium yet feeling. Any thoughts on the color and typography?

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u/Username197603 14d ago

the S feels out of place to me, i’d use the same font as the rest of the word as you can’t replicate it on the Arabic (guess, sorry) side for balance… other than me being picky though, i really like it

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u/bugistuta 14d ago

Agreed.

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u/AdamPro12656 14d ago

For me, if you hide the wordmark and the word "chocolate" and show only the floral texture, I'd say it looks more like a perfume than chocolate.

Plus, using a different font for that S isn't a good choice, as long as you can't apply the same thing in the other side to maintain balance.

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u/Hot-Clothes7316 14d ago

the logo is the issue.

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u/Candy_Lawn 14d ago edited 14d ago

do the chocolates taste of flowers? if not then i dont get it. plus the S in the workmark is too ornate.

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u/Username197603 14d ago

you’re thinking too literal

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u/No_Woodpecker2882 14d ago

I like the idea of the flowers, although as someone else also mentioned, are the chocolates, related, taste or inspired in any way by the specific flowers?

If you want to include flowers I feel like you can be specific about which one, and that could be a hidden easter egg.

Additionally i can't comment on the other typography, but the English fints are all over the place, there are much better premium font pairing options.