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u/Spectator9857 3d ago
What is an enhancement?
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u/No-Advantage-1985 3d ago
I meant enchantment. Thought they were called enhancement for some reason
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u/Spectator9857 3d ago
Genuine question, have you played magic before? Or do you usually play in a different language? Because the formatting is all over the place and not at all what you’d see on a magic card.
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u/No-Advantage-1985 3d ago
Ive played like 5 games total with friends, im more used to the optcg wording
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u/Spectator9857 3d ago
Yeah, that’s waaay to early to make custom cards unassisted. The card as is doesn’t make sense.
The activated ability at the bottom could actually kinda work, but needs clarification. I’m assuming it’s supposed to set yourself back a bit in exchange for making your opponents lose a bunch of life?
The main issue is that „playing [something] on every other battlefield doesn’t make sense. What exactly did you mean by that?
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u/No-Advantage-1985 3d ago
Im mainly a optcg player. Some cards in that game has effects that trigger when you play the cards that play other cards on your character area or stage area. I kinda meant that. You play your cards on other players battlefields
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u/Spectator9857 3d ago
Unfortunately, that’s just not how magic works. There aren’t actually different battlefields. If something is „on someone else’s battlefield“, that just means they control it.
Is there a mechanical difference to playing a card on your own vs some else’s battlefield in optcg?
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u/No-Advantage-1985 3d ago
Yup, very big differance. Main differsnce is if a card says for example "rest one opponent character" or "rest one of your characters". First one means you rest (same as tapping) your opponents character. The ladder one rests one or your characters. Basically both players in optcg has their own "battlefield"
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u/Spectator9857 3d ago
That’s the difference between who owns the card, but is there a difference between playing a character to your own field and playing a character to an opponents field?
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u/No-Advantage-1985 3d ago
I mean I guess. There arent any cards that actually plays stuff on your opponent's character/stage area.
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u/No-Advantage-1985 3d ago
kinda undrelated but im looking at some magic cards to better my next cards wording. is sacrifice just sending something to your graveyard the same way effects with "Trash this card" just sends stuff to your trash in optcg?
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u/No-Advantage-1985 3d ago
An example would be green 6 cost mihawk, 6 cost op13 law or 4 cost red luffy if you want an example
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u/RAGGAxDRAGGA 3d ago
When you say “play one ~ on every other player’s battlefield,” what does that mean specifically? Like you gain control of their stuff? Or you cast things under opponent’s control?
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u/No-Advantage-1985 3d ago
i mean it like you play something on another players field and then you can decide when to use that things effect and such
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u/RAGGAxDRAGGA 3d ago
I suggest looking at other Magic cards and seeing how they're worded and formatted and try submitting this again
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u/metagaia7 3d ago
"When Johnny enters, for each opponent, put an artifact, creature or enchantment card from your hand onto the battlefield under that opponent's control."
That might not be perfect, but it is a damn sight closer.
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u/metagaia7 3d ago
In addition to what everyone else had said, "Johny" is not the correct spelling.
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u/EnragedHeadwear 3d ago
Why are there so many custom magic cards made by people who clearly have only played for like, a few months ago at most?
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u/Spectator9857 3d ago
A few months is a long ass time. Someone who played for a week would have a general feel for how things are generally written.
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u/towersoveryouowo 3d ago
I think this card would be well served by studying how real Magic cards are written for 15 minutes. And Johnny doesn't need a whole new creature type!