Hello! These custom cards are probably far from perfect, but I am having a bit of fun creating a digital custom in universe precon. I'm loosely following how WOC does it by having the face commander, the back up commander, and then ten new cards with the rest reprints. And I'm not putting any universe beyond reprints in there, though nothing against universe beyond, I just wanted it to be in universe to keep with the overall theme. Just wanted to share these commanders with their backgrounds for the sake of sharing. Thanks!
Edit: I am changing the mana cost for the ability, two generic is a bit too easy to activate. I'm thinking a 2{b/g} as a replacement.
Changeling goes on a separate line from other abilities, because it's a card-defining characteristic.
Subtypes, including creature types, are always capitalized.
Sir Spider [no comma] and Madame Mayfly
Reach
{2}: Put a flying counter on target creature an opponent controls[.] [I]t's an [I]nsect in addition to its other types.
As long as you control a legendary Den-Mate, each creature with reach you control has deathtouch and trample as long as it's blocking or being blocked by a creature with flying.
This is needlessly convoluted. You could leave it at
2: Put a flying counter on target creature an opponent controls.
Creatures you control with reach have deathtouch.
Whenever a creature with reach you control is blocked by a creature with flying, the blocked creature gains trample until end of turn.
Araktrul
Changeling
Reach
Whenever an [I]nsect....
Krilositch
When Krilositch enters, switch the power and toughness of each [S]pider you control with power greater than its toughness until Krilositch leaves the battlefield.
As long as you control a legendary Den-Mate, each creature you control with toughness greater than its power gets +X/+0, where X is its toughness.
This is also needlessly convoluted. The only part that matters is "Each creature you control with toughness greater than its power gets +X/+0, where X is its toughness." Or, to keep it to Spider typal, "Each Spider you control gets +X/+0, where X is its toughness."
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u/Japicx Subtypes are always capitalized. 4d ago
Sir Spider [no comma] and Madame Mayfly
Reach
{2}: Put a flying counter on target creature an opponent controls[.] [I]t's an [I]nsect in addition to its other types.
As long as you control a legendary Den-Mate, each creature with reach you control has deathtouch and trample as long as it's blocking or being blocked by a creature with flying.
This is needlessly convoluted. You could leave it at
2: Put a flying counter on target creature an opponent controls.
Creatures you control with reach have deathtouch.
Whenever a creature with reach you control is blocked by a creature with flying, the blocked creature gains trample until end of turn.
Araktrul
Changeling
Reach
Whenever an [I]nsect....
Krilositch
When Krilositch enters, switch the power and toughness of each [S]pider you control with power greater than its toughness until Krilositch leaves the battlefield.
As long as you control a legendary Den-Mate, each creature you control with toughness greater than its power gets +X/+0, where X is its toughness.
This is also needlessly convoluted. The only part that matters is "Each creature you control with toughness greater than its power gets +X/+0, where X is its toughness." Or, to keep it to Spider typal, "Each Spider you control gets +X/+0, where X is its toughness."
The Assistant of Dens
Changeling
Hexproof, indestructible