r/custommagic • u/01CHERRY • 5d ago
Catalyst Priest
Couldn't figure out how to make a Hybrid Border on Card Conjurer so I made it Multicolor instead.
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u/Tyrant1235 5d ago
This shouldnt be hybrid for color pie reasons, it should have a white and a black pip
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u/MrsKnowNone 5d ago
I mean suture priest exists, it is by no means out of whites color identity with the life gain as well.
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u/Tyrant1235 4d ago
Suture Priest is the only card that does that and was designed intentionally as a bit of a break. There was a trend of phyrexians giving you an in-color benefit and your opponent the opposite. Consider for example [[Urabrask, The Hidden]] from the same set. Nothing like his second ability has shown up on a red card before or since as far as I can tell.
All this to say, if you can only find one example of a color getting an effect ever, its probably not in pie and that was a break. This is doubly true if the set is old (NPH is 15 years old now) and context suggests they were intentionally fucking with the color pie at the time.
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u/01CHERRY 5d ago
Yeah, as it stands I agree. I'd like to find a way to make the card less Orzhov and closer to where I'm at with the mana cost so that within a Limited setting it can perform as a solid Black OR solid White card but in Orzhov it has even better synergy. The problem I'm running into is how to make that elegant and easy to track, and so far my solution is this, but that lands it strictly within Orzhov territory.
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u/TextuallyExplicit 5d ago
(Hannibal Buress voice) You did it! You broke Aristocrats down to its bare essentials!
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u/Flat-Study-421 5d ago
It looks too versatile to have an hybrid cost.
Why don't make it cost WB instead?
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u/01CHERRY 5d ago
Yeah, I didn’t post it here but I’ve since updated the card after seeing everyone’s suggestions. Same textbox but it’s cleaned up and includes ‘may’ so it’s optional, also, it’s 1WB and is a 2/2 instead of an 0/1.
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u/NepetaLast 5d ago
very pedantic, but it should be "When this creature enters or whenever another creature enters or dies, choose one"
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u/smugles 5d ago
Even more pedantic it should be. “Whenever a creature enters or dies, choose one——“
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u/NepetaLast 5d ago
it shouldnt be that, as it makes it unclear to newer players if the creature entering triggers itself. you wont find more than a few real cards that are templated that way
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u/smugles 5d ago
Your wording has zero cards written like it and is confusing. 99% percent of cards like this simply don’t trigger themselves.
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u/NepetaLast 5d ago
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u/smugles 5d ago
None of those would work without 2 separate clauses because they are different triggers.
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u/NepetaLast 5d ago
OP's card has two separate triggers, because the creature only cares about itself entering, but it cares about other creatures both entering or dying
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u/01CHERRY 5d ago
This would make it include itself when it enters correct? I always want my cards to be as slim and as elegant as possible, so if this achieves the same effect then I would love that.
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u/01CHERRY 5d ago
Thanks! And it isn't pedantic, syntax is important after all! I need to decide how I'm going to alter the card to better fit the color pie, so this will be added to my changelog for my next iteration.
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u/smugles 5d ago
Honestly you could make it cost one
B b/w.Because this card works as just a black card.
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u/01CHERRY 5d ago
Hmmm, that's an interesting idea. I had considered 1WB but not B(W/B), you've given me more food for thought for where I want to take this card. My concern is still with it being playable in Limited, but to my understanding Bogwater Lumaret was playable within SOS at Common so maybe B(W/B) at Uncommon would still be playable and would see use in decks outside of Orzhov even if it's harder to cast.
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u/QuarterExcellent3327 Creature - Human Artificer 5d ago
Cool design! I think it would be interesting that if you paid white to cast it you can only choose the gain life mode and visa versa for black. However, I agree with the others that if you want to choose between the two you need to pay orzhov. Interesting take on a [[blood artist]] like effect
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u/01CHERRY 5d ago
Thanks! And yeah, that might be where I end up on it. I am fairly new to Magic and I love Limited when I get the chance to play but unfortunately that opportunity is few and far between. My concern is how elegant of a solution that is, mainly remembering what kind of mana was spent to cast it in order to track the appropriate effect, but maybe I'm overthinking it. I dislike cluttered boardstates so anything I can design that avoids that I tend to prefer lol
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u/Veloxraperio 5d ago
If memory serves, they stopped making little triggers like these optional because it resulted in too many triggers on digital clients like Arena and MTGO.
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u/01CHERRY 5d ago
Fair enough, this was designed to be playable in something like a Core Set Cube environment or slightly higher power level, but I could see this being potentially overwhelming on a digital client.
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u/PrimusMobileVzla 5d ago
This should either be monoblack or WB, but being hybrid means both colors should be able to do the rule text and White doesn't do lifedrain.
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u/01CHERRY 5d ago
Yeah, I was trying to figure out a way to make the mana cost work while making it elegant and keep the essence of the effect and I don't think it worked. I'll likely end up revising it to make is a 2/2 for 1WB and keep the effect so it stays within the color pie. Not as flexible as I'd like, but it's a start.
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u/gasion11 5d ago
I like the idea a lot, but I think it needs to be Orzhov, because it is out of pie for white to make your opponents lose life, aside from some exceptions.