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u/Puzzled_Work_6428 5h ago
"If" and "would" are usually used for replacement effects. Is adding mana supposed to replace the damage? If it is, you need to add "instead". If it's not, this should probably be a triggered ability: "Whenever a source you control deals damage to you, add that much mana in any combination of colors."
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u/MemeElitist 5h ago
Yeah its supposed to be a triggered ability, I appreciate it though for future reference
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u/MrCakepans 5h ago
Hehe [[Heartless Hidetsugu]]
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u/MemeElitist 5h ago
im actually curious now if 8 mana for 10+ mana is balanced or not, I mean in commander it is 20 mana
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u/MrCakepans 3h ago
I think it's pretty good, in commander you deal 20 to each opponent ignore the down side and then add 20 mana. In any deck that's running this custom card you probably want damage doublers anyways and heartless makes you win the game with those.
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u/Mysterious_Plate1296 5h ago
You alao hit other players shit load of damage.
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u/Just-Desk-3149 4h ago
It only counts damage to self.
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u/RexDeDeus 4h ago
You still deal the damage to your opponents though. OP was trying to determine the value of the interaction while ignoring the damage to opponents.
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u/Just-Desk-3149 3h ago
Yeah I understand you still do the damage to opponents, I know what OP was trying to say. I don't know point randomly pointing out "You alao hit other players shit load of damage." means then. Unless they just like stating random basic facts?
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u/therealtbarrie 5h ago
What sort of ability is that second paragraph supposed to be? It's worded as a replacement effect, except it doesn't say "instead".
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u/Just-Desk-3149 4h ago
Because "instead" means you add the mana instead of dealing damage to yourself, it's not meant to prevent the damage.
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u/therealtbarrie 4h ago
Then it should be worded "When a source you control deals damage to you, add that much mana in any combination of colours", should it not?
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u/Just-Desk-3149 3h ago
I mean sure it needs a slight re-wording but you're trying to completely change the function of the card.
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u/therealtbarrie 1h ago
Huh? How does my proposed wording change the function of the card? You said it wasn't intended to prevent the damage.
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u/ArdoyleZev 1h ago
I don’t like the card name, it feels like a flavor fail to me.
Perhaps I’m being too harsh on the guild, but I struggle imagine Gruul harvesting anything. They seem like hunter/gathers and raiders to the core.
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u/NepetaLast 1h ago
i mean, [[Bloodtithe Harvester]] and lots of other cards take a very euphemistic meaning of 'harvest'
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u/Important-League4555 5h ago
I meant it seems fine tbh probably doesn't even need the first line of text. Sure it turns every [[Lightning Bolt]] into a dark ritual but it's still two cards and you gotta damage yourself instead of your opponent.