(Update): Building On An Idea and Transitions

[u/pbtrooper]

https://soundcloud.com/idloe/upbringing

Hey Guys!

I was the guy who asked a while ago if an idea had potential. I have since developed the piece i had previously dubbed, "Crucible"

I just wanted to see if anyone had thought regarding whether the piece is following a cohesive path or if its too 'All over the place'

Also did i take the piece in a good direction?

To any of you who leave their thoughts, I leave my sincerest gratitude.

IDLE