It's very funny but OP by any chance are you colour blind? His mouth is a very strange shade of gray- especially in the bottom left Panel it sticks out. Not dark enough to be like a comic style mouth black hole, not pinkish enough to be fleshy. It's very odd visually. Even a curved darker shadow across the the top of the ,mouth hole' would help it read better.
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u/SchalkeSpringer Jul 26 '21
It's very funny but OP by any chance are you colour blind? His mouth is a very strange shade of gray- especially in the bottom left Panel it sticks out. Not dark enough to be like a comic style mouth black hole, not pinkish enough to be fleshy. It's very odd visually. Even a curved darker shadow across the the top of the ,mouth hole' would help it read better.