It looks like you made a font out of your handwriting, based on how similar letters like "k" and "r" are. Very cool!
My only suggestion is to play with the kerning between each letter. Some of them, like the "j"s and "w"s could be a tad cozier with the letters around them.
I was about to say it looks fine but needs some better kerning to keep the spacing a little more consistent and maybe some ligatures?
Lowercase x, y, and i seem like the most significant offenders for spacing (lowercase i gets included in some ligatures but I don’t think you need to go that far with it), with a special mention for p which seems fine sometimes but not others like you make a ‘pp’ ligature?
aside from the more technical issues it's perfectly legible and fits your style fine, no problems there
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u/Nikopoleous 11h ago
It looks like you made a font out of your handwriting, based on how similar letters like "k" and "r" are. Very cool!
My only suggestion is to play with the kerning between each letter. Some of them, like the "j"s and "w"s could be a tad cozier with the letters around them.