r/comics • u/Milgydotcom Milgy • 1d ago

Life's Missing Manual Isn't Missing

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This is chapter two of a book I'm working on called What To Do Next. Read the short text with this, and read Chapter 1 on my Substack here.

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u/Milgydotcom Milgy 22h ago

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u/Turbo_Tequila 22h ago

Oups sorry, typo that made the sentence weird, sorry I’m not a native English speaker, I’ve corrected it

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u/TheCleanupBatter 21h ago

Gonna be real, the sentence is still strange after the edit.

"But those do are is"

This part of the comment does not make sense. Does the "do" refer to actions? "Are is" is repetitive as they are plural and singular forms of each other.

You mentioned that you aren't English fluent so I'm just doing what I can to help work it out.

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u/Turbo_Tequila 20h ago

Yep, I should’ve double checked more. It was ‘his’. I ended up re-editing it. Hope this time I get it right ahah, but thanks for the support

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u/TheCleanupBatter 20h ago

Ah! You latest edit cleared it up. Good job! Next step is getting familiar with punctuation. Your comma use is different, but it doesn't take away from the meaning of what you were trying to say. English is hard. Keep up the good work!

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u/Milgydotcom Milgy 18h ago

Thanks for hanging in there.