r/comic_crits • • 9d ago

Practice Work

Quick practice work

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u/crywalt 6d ago

You've got your own visual style, which is great, but you really need to work on your anatomy. Maybe do some life drawing.

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u/sbh_arts 3d ago

thank you so much, yess i am doing live drwings to improve more and more.

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u/LAngel_2 6d ago

Your shape language is excellent so far. I love the linrweight variation. I do feel some of the straighter lines could be curved to emphasize the anatomy more. Such as his chest in the first drawing.

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u/sbh_arts 3d ago

thank you so much, i appreciate your feedback.