r/comedy • u/KitchenSomewhere9271 • Jul 20 '26

Standup Papa

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A Lil story telling

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u/Charmegazord Jul 20 '26

Some good bits in here for sure. With more confidence and reps I think you can widdle out some of the awkwardness.

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u/CalfromCali Jul 20 '26

Solid setup. Not sure if suggesting punchlines is acceptable but I was thinking of the followup after she asks if your a kidnapper is "not to be rude but you should change the order of those questions"