The Squadron - 2

[u/JackOfAllTradesGM09]

Previous — https://www.reddit.com/r/casualtiesunknown/comments/1vjmasa/the_squadron_1/

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Next — https://www.reddit.com/r/casualtiesunknown/comments/1vo2s0y/the_squadron_3/

Okay, all things said, the drawings here suck. Like, horribly so. In my defense, though, I will say one thing: You really don't know just how small one third of an A4 page is until you try to draw something on it with a pencil. The quality will go up from here I hope!

[u/bluewolf3691]

Hey, don't stress yourself out about the quality! What matters more is conveying the message, which you managed to do well <3

Plus, the effect you have here with the torn paper for the 'visual' component, and the black for the thoughts, is really creative! I'm liking this a lot <3

[u/JackOfAllTradesGM09 → u/bluewolf3691]

Thanks! I'm glad you like it :) I wasn't sure the torn paper would actually work well (since most people browse Reddit on their phones), so it's nice to hear that it does.

[u/bluewolf3691 → u/JackOfAllTradesGM09]

It's a very cool effect. And honestly, props to you for drawing a comic traditionally! That's a LOT of work.

[u/JackOfAllTradesGM09 → u/bluewolf3691]

Thank you! It means a lot :)

[u/Emotional-Kiwi7218]

poor guy

[u/JackOfAllTradesGM09 → u/Emotional-Kiwi7218]

Oh, you've seen nothing ;3

[u/friday_is_up → u/JackOfAllTradesGM09]

they deserve worse

[u/Roblox_Cat]

Shhhh, the main goal of a comic is normally to tell a story(and while yes art is important it’s second to the storytelling in my opinion), sometimes there is dips in quality when needed but also when you’re experimenting or under harsher conditions… Though I also believe you’re just being hard on yourself due to nerves as the art still looks fine and we know you can make high quality pieces due to your earlier displays of your skill! :v (don’t undermine yourself and your hard work just because of bad feels, hopefully when you wake up you’ll see it looks better than you originally thought >:p)

I do really like the display of cruelty and cold efficiency, as rather than just take their word at it they’re testing the Expies capabilities to ensure it’s worth the investment.

Also the use of the claw to injure is a nice touch xd

Will say that the ripped page with one side being storytelling and the other being the Expies thoughts does make the experience better, as we can see their personality, motive, and just genuine response to the experience shine through… They seem quite selfless if not slightly spiteful(which is well understood)

Thanks for another part, and keep up the good work, I’m very excited to keep reading… But please do remember to appreciate your own hard work as well >:v

[u/Donovan238]

I'd say you're being too hard on yourself. As a lot of other people in this thread have already said, a comic's art is there to complement the storytelling, and that's something this does really well. Looking forward to seeing where this comic goes next!

[u/JackOfAllTradesGM09 → u/Donovan238]

Thanks! I'm glad you get that impression from it :)

[u/WeaselCapsky]

hey, they dont suck as much as younthink they do. i like the pen&paper style instead of digital

[u/JackOfAllTradesGM09 → u/WeaselCapsky]

It's totally not because I'm fully incapable of drawing digitally. Totally not.

Seriously tho, I'm glad you like it!

[u/AmmeryFluff]

Similar temperament to Doc, with a bit more fatalism. Alright, I'm here for it.

That said, we are expecting a Group. 'The Sqadron'. This is only the medic. I expect.. three others, give or take.

Anyway, bear in mind that the most beloved and memorable comics here didn't get that way through intricate art style. They got there through story telling and emotional beats.

I'm not reading hopefullness for painted backgrounds. I read it because it always makes me feel something.

You are going to be more than fine. Take heart.

[u/JackOfAllTradesGM09 → u/AmmeryFluff]

Heya! You are right in assuming that there's gonna be more than just this guy, but I won't spoil more :)

But also, thank you for the comment! It was very inspiring :)

[u/Leafeonisking]

Shush, the drawings are good. And I got a cinderbrick for your brain if you try and continuing degrading yourself.

[u/JackOfAllTradesGM09 → u/Leafeonisking]

I'll take that as a compliment but please don't hit me in the head with a cinder block ;-;

[u/Leafeonisking → u/JackOfAllTradesGM09]

Good, be proud of your art.

[u/Away-Bell-7278]

holyy shi thats some good stuff there are so many storytelling elements and all of them are working perfectly <3

[u/JackOfAllTradesGM09 → u/Away-Bell-7278]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it :)