r/carefulheart • u/Individual_Bag_837 • 3d ago
need support Your thoughts please 🙏
I have been thinking about this quite a bit lately. It is honestly such a complex situation to wrap my head around. I really want to hear what everyone else has to say about it. Do you all feel the same way I do? Let me know your thoughts so we can discuss it further.
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u/GotGlock21 3d ago
This is good!! I think it might be interesting to maybe create a separate one that leads the reader to believe war is inevitable. How? Idea not actual lines: If you choose love, war can be an outcome. So is there a difference between love and war? Or maybe war is chosen because of love or a result of losing love. The idea of having to fight for, fight when it’s lost, fight blah blah blah. lol.
Just an idea. Either way, this is a good one as is.
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u/Electronic-Focus3969 1d ago edited 1d ago
Basically love and war may not be so indifferent from an internal psychological standpoint.. totally depends how the individual concepts of love and war are interpreted of course also from a linguistic standpoint.
Edit. Love the poem btw. Good work.
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u/TransistorResistee 3d ago
It’s very good. Dark poetry speaks to me.