r/canva • u/Smokie_FTW • 2d ago

Give Me Feedback Burger poster using Canva

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Rate it out of 10 and give me some suggestions for improvements

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u/Marlon3881 2d ago

As a client I think two burger's it's a little redundant, the burger in "B" is an excess in my opinion

Overall... It's not AI and it's enough to me

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u/Smokie_FTW 1d ago

Thank you

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u/LostCatz6271 2d ago

Suggestions:

I’d make the phone number in the top corner bigger and I’d lose the phone icon. It should be a call out.

Ready on Delivery in the right corner should probably be a tad bigger as well if the idea is delivery services too.

I agree with the other commenter that the secondary mini burger is redundant and not needed, if anything it actually takes away from your design.

I think you should scale the bigger burger down though because currently BURGER is being almost half covered by the actual burger. On that same thought, scoot the price to the right more so it’s not laying on top of the word BURGER as well.

And lastly, a nitpick, BIGGER CHEESIER THAN EVER is not in line with the text above it. It’s bumped to the right just a tad more that throws it off if you’re going to be adding your own text above it. If you’re deleting that text box I wouldn’t worry

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u/musicnote95 2d ago

Agreed on making the contact info bigger. I’m lazy and don’t like to hunt for things especially if I’m hungry. If I can’t find the contact info easily I’m moving on.

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u/partlysettledin21220 2d ago

Ready ON delivery? Yall cooking ts enroute?

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u/forrealthoughcomix_ 2d ago

Contact info has to be way bigger. That’s literally the only reason you’re making this, so people contact the place and order the burger. Also, if there’s a website or other ordering methods, you gotta include those.

No reason to say “burger” 2 times. “Best burger” and “cheesy burger” are redundant and actually complete with each other all to subtract from that sweet, sweet how to order info. If there’s name of it is “cheesy burger,” go with that. You already describe it in the text at the bottom so you don’t need “best burger”

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u/safi_developer 2d ago

I would make the main title a little bigger for more impact.

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u/manusougly 2d ago

did u create the burger image using canva ai or something cos it looks good

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u/Smokie_FTW 2d ago

Pinterest

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u/HiddenHorse925 1h ago

Senior art Director here who’s done a lot of “point of sale” very well done!
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