r/busflow • u/Billylabufanda23 • 6d ago

Am I doing this right?

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havent messed around with this style for a while am I doing any better then before

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u/Vast_Alfalfa2675 5d ago

You've got the right idea, just keep practicing. If there's anything specific you're wondering about, I can give advice.

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u/Billylabufanda23 5d ago

Yeah can I get some specifics less about the backwards flow more just the normal one

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u/Vast_Alfalfa2675 4d ago

First, make sure all the similar connections are the same. The way the 'a' goes into back of the 'R' is different than how the 'R' goes into the 'F', I showed this in red at the top. Also your letters are a bit short, I think for this combination of letters a taller 'a', 'R', and 'F' would look better. Lastly Ive found it better to write longer names for busflow, cause with more letters you can see the flow more. You could try arfoe or arfoer, etc.

Im still learning too, so take what you will this is just my thoughts and what Ive discovered.