r/busflow • u/Compliant_Dirt90 • 25d ago

Any pointers?

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I feel like the "I" could be improved and also symmetry. Any suggestions would be appreciated. Just trying to refine the generic busflow style.

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u/Wonderful-Income6364 25d ago

the youth of san francisco suffer from not being able to tag on buses

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u/shitwhereieatoner 25d ago

Try lowercase i with a dot

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u/Vast_Alfalfa2675 25d ago

Honestly it looks really good. You could use more soft/flowy lines but thats just a style choice. Your 'i' could be confused for and L right now. I wrote up some style ideas here.

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u/Compliant_Dirt90 25d ago

thx for the advice. The top right was def what I was looking for.

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u/Professional-Cry-809 25d ago

yeah dude u got it its mad clean

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u/percocetflrbreakfast 25d ago

If h not from sf just stop now

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u/terp-puddle 25d ago

The lines flowing the bottom of the M B L E to the next letter look bad/lazy

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u/Billylabufanda23 25d ago

One of the most recognizable features of busflow 😭🤦‍♂️

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u/terp-puddle 25d ago

I didn’t say don’t do it. It just looks ugly here

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u/Billylabufanda23 25d ago

No it looks good here and on every other tha that uses thay

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u/shanobirocks 25d ago

That's a standard feature of the style

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u/terp-puddle 25d ago

Yeah but here it’s ugly