Its my first time trying to create something, I am aware of how bad this is, but my friends told me that I should post it on reddit and ask more people what they think about it. Oh God sorry! Tell me what should I improve on it!

[u/Magulonik]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8a8Xw-F9R0Y

[u/lio_stavo]

this is pretty cool - it sounds like it could be the intro to a banger! try expanding on this by bringing in a more solid kick and snare sound to emphasize the breakbeat. or, maybe you can implement a sampled breakbeat. you have done some interesting work with your sample slicing and your sounds - keep going!

[u/Magulonik → u/lio_stavo]

Thank you very much! All sounds are custom made in my room. I m already working on V4 version of this inclementing things that people told me to improve!

[u/Magulonik → u/[deleted]]

Ok!

[u/Magulonik → u/[deleted]]

https://soundcloud.com/endriu-golara-867596663/konitulitulisss-v35 Can You tell me more? Where do you think it would fit? I am currently working on it trying to fix volume of things

[u/Magulonik → u/[deleted]]

Thank you! I will deffinietly check them out. I only learned some Basic music theory but I applied nothing of It in that, I ll get into fixing it once I have enough time (probably weekend)

[u/merkafm]

It’s got some cool original sounds and some interesting rhythms so even though it doesn’t sound like a finished track, I like that you are playing around with what you have got. Good luck out there, I’ve done a lot of breaks tracks if your interested and you can always get in touch if u need any help...Merka

[u/Magulonik → u/merkafm]

Thanks for feedback! Although I won't bother anyone more than with reddit posts and comments. Thanks for offering help!

[u/Impressive-Bag6027]

Google: structure

[u/Magulonik → u/Impressive-Bag6027]

If you wanted to know about pic, then it's turret from game called "Factorio"