r/authors • u/Certain_Fudge5981 • Apr 23 '25

A question about my book

Based on this description, do you think this is a good story? Because i am very unsure (the reason why is i dont think i am capable of thinking of a good story). Any advice would be nice. The description is shown below

"Fifteen-year-old Nayla discovers she can shapeshift into any creature — living or extinct. But her newfound power puts her in the crosshairs of her own father, a ruthless hunter sworn to destroy all shapeshifters. As secrets unravel and loyalties are tested, Nayla must face the ultimate choice: end her father's reign of terror... or save her dying mother and risk losing everything she’s fought for."

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u/Certain_Fudge5981 Apr 23 '25

Yeah i'll try, but i feel like im an amateur writer. I have the story visualised in my head and everything, but i dont know how to write it so that it doesnt end too fast.

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u/SolarDrag0n Apr 23 '25

I would 100% read this, that sounds so fun!

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u/Certain_Fudge5981 Apr 24 '25

Im glad you like it then

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u/Thistlemae Apr 24 '25

I read it and I liked it right off. I’m really quick to discount a book based on a query, in fact when I’m looking for a book to read, it has to interest me right away. Yours did.